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Full Moon wo Shagashite

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This piece took forever to finish... I was working on it the whole weekend, at the school's 30th anniversary celebration... and I finished it today.

The shading on the girl's face was a bit messed up, so I made her face slimmer... their clothes are supposed to be white/yellow, so I didn't do a lot of shading for that. But I did a LOT of shading in their hair.

Ball point pen, A4 printing paper, probably around six hours (lol), textures and tint added in Photoshop. This picture is from a manga artbook.
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:star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

This is a very cute piece. It reminds me of the manga "Fruit Basket"'s style. The girl's face is a tad long, the chin and cheeks making it a bit on the awkward side. The eyes are gorgeous and hair is just wonderful, though. The clothes look great but I feel as if the sleeves on the girl are a bit over exaggerated. Too sharp and edgy. The boy is very handsome and well done. The perspective is decant but I feel as though the shoulder is a tad short. Needs to be a little bit longer. Otherwise, he looks great. Overall a cute piece and I can't wait to see more of your works!